You have been through a lifetime of pain in a small space of time. You asked me to take a look at your piece and give you advice. First, let me say that it's beyond me sometimes how some of the pieces I read here have thousands of claps and then pieces like yours have zero. As it says in Matthew, "Don't lose heart. In this world you will have trouble, but I have overcome the world." The only thing I wished you would have done was just shared a bit more. This piece brought me to tears for you. I empathized instantly with you and it made me examine my own struggles and reassess their real importance. I am going to check out more of your pieces. I will also share on my Twitter account. It's a pleasure to meet you and I am grateful our paths have crossed, though we know, with God there are never an accidents. Blessings~